All Comments on 'Polynesian Surprise'

by ToddLong

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wild!

Very wild, wet and exotic. I loved the forced bi-sexual action and fat queen. The writing is full of detail but not too wordy, long or difficult.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hot!

Good story, I especially liked the ending. Perhaps in your next one you could have more speech?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
a real erotic turn-on

enjoyed this- loved the -sexy fat woman and the mans thick penis description! thank you!

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