by Kevsta
Hey...you can draw! As a longtime student, the behavior in the studio was minimally credible. Usually, the model disrobes behind a door or something and comes out in a robe. Also..a drawing class WITHOUT nudes? Occasionally only...usually alternating costume and nude days. Could squiff up the writing a little, but it's a poignant storyline. I liked the character and was interested to hear more. That drawing has a real mission in this story.
Keep going!
Kind regards, 243
Thank you for liking my story so much you rewrote it from an alternative view-point.
I love it!