A Gypsy's Tale Ch. 05

Excellently done!!

I have been awaiting the new chapters eagerly and have enjoyed them immensly.. you weave a wonderful tale full of twists,intrigue, and passion I look forwards to the next installment to see what the lady will do to become princess or will tecor be up to the task to keep esric

The end?

Seriously I would of never started reading the story if I'd known it would of ended with it hanging like chapter 5. I most def won't be reading any other of your stories just for that reason.

BAD FEEDBACK

Don't you just hate bad feedback.. I don't refer to positive advice, just the crap where sombody is spiteful just for the sake of it? I mean; what the hell was the point of that last piece of feedback, "I'm not reading anything else by you because it ends on a cliff hanger". Good- fuck off then. I used to get that a lot on here, especially the subject that I was writing. I really enjoyed your story, please keep going.

MORE!

Plez finish this story. Don't be like some writers that leave us hanging and never end it. I am hooked!!

You have a gift for storytelling, but you would benefit from the services of an equally gifted proofreader.....