All Comments on 'Suburban Submission Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
H.O.T.

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Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
SUPER !!!!!

Lovely story. So erotic and made my cunt drip !!!!!

Joan @ The JERSEY SHORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
YUMM

Oh PLEASE! Write us more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent!

Please continue! I love it when black women dominate white women!

VagabondxVagabondxabout 15 years ago
WOW!

that was too fucking hot! can't wait for the next episode!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Please Continue

as others have noted, super hot, please continue, this has all sorts of possiblities

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Not my normal thing but very good.

Looking forward to the next installment.

girlsluvcumgirlsluvcumabout 15 years ago
Idea

Why not have Jenny "convince" her husband to fuck Karen?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very Good

Continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW!

I'm still rubbing my wet & swollen pussy. I've never been with another woman before but have fantasised about one of my best friends who flirts with me & often jokes about us playing together. I'm off to buy some champagne now & I'm going to phone her & get her over tomorrow. P.S. I'M GOING TO TAKE CONTROL. thanks for giving me the idea & the courage. WOW!!!

RedtoffeeRedtoffeeover 13 years ago
Fab tale

Beautifully told tale of subjugation. You have a rare gift for the genre.

Girlygirl888Girlygirl888about 12 years ago
Hot

Would love to meet a Karen!

sissynekosissynekoover 11 years ago
Lovely

Very sexy, and well paced.

adge747adge747over 10 years ago
Thank you

Very erotic story of a new domination I hope there is a sequel to this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Frisson

I can see Jenny really enjoyed her sexual release, the sensations appear to be heightened by her own emerging bisexuality, but it seems more importantly by the hold Karen has over her. The two ladies look as those they will continue to share some good times!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yummy!

It would be interesting if Karen made Jenny tease her son.

huntsman29huntsman29about 7 years ago
Likly uneffective blackmail

Doubt that tape would have worked. 18+ year old sex tape and smoking weed as a teenager. Hardly a big deal.

sharksharksharksharkover 6 years ago
awesome

Hell drag Jenny's mother in there to watch her precious daughter go down on her new Mommy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
reads alot like another story from

heathrowinohio... has its parallels...

Copycat88Copycat88about 4 years ago
MORE!

Nicely done....Good suspense. I'll enjoy reading more.

Pat2610Pat2610almost 3 years ago

I love to fing fuck off every day

PhilLustyPhilLustyabout 2 years ago

This needs some flow and quite a few word usages were a distraction. Overall the story has a good premise Just hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing!!! I loved it and was very hard when reading it. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

5 stars because you write well. Women on women just not my thing. Having said that, I wish you well as you find your niche.

Beejay3Beejay32 months ago

Lovely one -sided sex affair..what’s in their future?

Would love to follow them!

Thanks

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