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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/09

sorry!

but your english sucks.

you have potentially good ideas but you are unreadable at this time.
and as a side issue... too much detail about weapons detracts from a story.

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by Anonymous01/18/09

Your English

Your English is good mate! Keep up the good work!

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