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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/09

go native

You might want to re-write this one in your native language. The plot had no direction. Good luck.

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by Anonymous01/18/09

very hot story...

but the heat is hard to maintain while navigating through the atrocious grammar. You obviously have a wonderfully dirty mind - do us all a favour and get an editor (hell, me'll volunteer!) so us can enjoy the eroticism without cringing at the abuse of the language. Pieater

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