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Mixed Blessings Ch. 01

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by Anonymous01/18/09

Very different!

I love your writing and your imagination! I'll be on the lookout for the next part!

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by ebonygriot01/18/09

Unique and very enticing

Very refreshing approach to this genre. Your writing reminds me in places of China Mieville. Loved the characteristics of the dog. The humour and irreverence season this chapter lightly along with the intriguing premise of the plot this feels like a story to keep up with. Bloody hell I hope the next chapter gets posted soon!

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by Anonymous01/19/09

I like it too

Pretty good. Just watch the sentence structure though. It's a bit off at times. I also look forward to more.

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