that should be able to happen, but will not in fact occur. This, however, is fiction and suspension of disbelief is essential if you intend to read and enjoy the stories.
by
Anonymous01/19/09
This. Was. AWESOME!!!!
You gotta love revenge served cold. 5 stars all the fucking way!!!
... some logic questions, would a jilted guy be so dumb as to document that he committed entrapment (or something like that) and the off shore bank account? Good fun though thanks for writing.
by
Anonymous01/19/09
A Little Too Much Plotting
I have to say while I enjoyed reading this story, it was not up to your usual standards. It's not that I didn't like the storyline or what the husband did to the wife. I just thought it was over the top. While the wife did humiliate him and deserved what she got. I just got the feeling that he was somehow brought down to her level with all the plotting. Just a few of the things he did could have done the job nicely. I have loved all your other stories and usually rate them 100. I particularly loved 'Billy'.
by
Anonymous01/19/09
hmmm... fun revenge
but maybe he shouldn't be stupid enough to provide his wife with enough evidence to put him in jail for fraud and theft. Duh
Retold a hundred times. Like sipping a good single malt whiskey it went smoothly. I enjoyed the fantasy but would have been much more preemptive and certainly would have restricted my letter to the first paragraph...
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Never leave a paper trail!
It is dumb to confess anything anywhere anytime. I do have reservations on not getting a divorce. It may be of no concern if he stays out of country but has legal implications. If you are married, living together or not, the other spouse without your knowledge can use your line of credit, botrow large sums of money in your name, file tax returns in your name, and do a large variety of things without your knowledge or permission. A power of attorney is only really needed when one sells things with titles or such. Also she can as your wife file charges against you, seek civil charges, and you can be held responsible for her medical care and housing. Put another way, unless you just want to be a criminal on the run for the rest of your life not getting a divorce is very stupid idea. It really doesnt take much. A lawyer can file a divorce action and carry it thru without you even being there. But the letter in a divorce action could be used against you financially. Back to never leave a paper trail!
I enjoyed the read; it was short, to the point, and fairly well written. But to get a power of attorney, one needs to have the document witnessed and notarized, so having the wife sign a piece of paper while recovering from an awesome fuck won't cut it. And of course, the letter provides evidence against Hubby as another commented. But it's just a story and it was done in a fairly original way (I've only seen a couple of other 'letters to my ex' in Literotica). It's nice to see a man who will stand up for himself and who won't put up with the cuckold humiliation. Thanks for writing.
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Yes
I like it when a cheating slut whore gets FUCKED real goooood, and her stud big cock got it tooooo.--Good Read
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Xtremely Silly....
Its amazing that a story like THIS is called realistic by the same folks who regard any other outcome as fantasy! LOL! Hey, revenge fantasies are satisfying, but this is pretty much nonsense.
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Great fantasy ending!
Lots of plot issues but still a good fantasy ending to a slut wife / wimp husband story.
O'Henry would have loved this story. This is poetic justice, by any standard. The cumulative pounding of the letter is like a jackhammer on concrete. It is designed to break things up. And what perfect targets!
This is an excellent read!
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Fuck O'Herny...I loved it
It's what should happen to every cheating slut and the bastard they cheat with...KUDOS...Yea...Cheers...marriedwithballs@yah oo.com
by
Anonymous01/19/09
Too bad you put it in writing
You had tremendous potential for a great story! You ruined it by making your story your own admission, in writing of all the things you did I still gave you a 50 because a lot of it was well done. Make the next one tighter, friend....the story, not the box you fuck!
I liked the cold rage which was the tone of delivering the details of the revenge. Previous comments reg. the dubious wisdom in disclosing all the where and how's of his revenge were correct.
It seems to me that the husband could have written the letter in a more ambiguous way, not allowing the authorities to tie him tie him to particular illegal activities, while at the same time leaving it clear enough for his ex to figure out that she is paying dearly for disrespecting and cheating on her husband, but just as much for making the fatal mistake of misjudging him as a wimp...
Still, I found that this potential legal vulnerability has not affected my ability to join with the husband in his crusade of revenge…
I sure liked the plot. The cockhold gently turns it all around. I am almost sorry not to read what the wife's letter would have to say. A fine tongue in check humorous story.
by
Anonymous01/20/09
I never quite understand these types of stories.
Although my first marriage partially broke up because of an affair my wife had with a buddy of mine while I was overseas in the service (I say "partially" because the marriage had more fundamental problems), what the hell, I had cheated, also. And, yes, I can understand the "size" thing, since my buddy was substantially better hung than myself. But I never quite understand the fascination with such degradation of the husband as is shown here. He's not a virile husband being cucked, he's just a wimp. What's the fascination in this? St. George killing the dragon has held our interest for centuries. But killing a dragonfly? (The story, itself, I think is well handled. The letter format can bring a great degree of intimacy and directness.)
No return address, no forwarding address, well done. The lovers returned to find themselves completely fucked! Just as it should be.
by
Anonymous01/22/09
great story
If only in real life this could happen that what makes a great story.It doesn't matter if it a man or woman there are pricks out there and it is good to see even if it only in a story them get payed back.
by
Anonymous01/22/09
great story
If only in real life this could happen that what makes a great story.It doesn't matter if it a man or woman there are pricks out there and it is good to see even if it only in a story them get payed back.
by
Anonymous01/24/09
Best Sort of Story!
My favorite brand of story, and a well-written one, at that!
Thanks- and I hope you'll treat us again along these lines in the future.
by
Anonymous01/24/09
game set and match
the two were caught up in their own delusions and got soundly nailed. and the wife, so much for brad, where he cheated on his wife, why not her too ! a happy ending
by
Anonymous01/28/09
Based on "Never leave a paper trail"
I'd like to see a sequel, one in which each gets what he/she deserves. Her for cheating and humiliating, and him for stealing what is legally her half of property and cash.
I know the readers here want blood and shredded bodies, but the more responsible want some sense of justice. Getting them fired, telling the families, and getting a settlement should suffice.
Rich
by
Anonymous02/01/09
Would love to see...
Would love to see a sequel where that whore of a wife gets whats coming to her...but thats me :P
by
Anonymous02/17/09
Some people have concerns with the paper trail
If you never come back to the states why worry, it isnt like you will extridited for over spending your credit cards. Yes the wife signed the power of attorney and the husband did to, they didnt bother to read, whose fault is that. Try breaking a contract when you havent read the fine print and see what a lawyer and judge do to you. The new couple isnt divorced so she was spending money on what amounts to her credit card but will leave it to her ex to pay the bills, nothing illegal there. He closed his joint cards nothing illegal there. He sold the house and furniture and used her share of the funds to pay off bills, this is iffy, but they arent divorced and she has no share to speak of. Paying off bills is actually a good thing. Moving his accounts out fo the country is iffy but it removes it from her lawyers touch. Moving it to two or three other untouchable countries would eliminate the paper trail. Suing the company and getting the guy fired was proper his actions brought it on himself and their is no problem there. Yes if they seek a divorce they could try to seek a share of the funds they lost but it would be almost impossible to trace and get. Again if they stay out of thee country and are careful where they go nothing will ever happen to the happy couple. Grow up folks the world is not a liberal politically correct place.
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Anonymous02/17/09
Short
I loved the story but it was a bit on the short side
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Anonymous04/03/09
Pretty Immature
Reads like a whiney little boy trying to get even. A real man would have let his actions speak for themselves. What's even more interesting is all the readers that really enjoyed the letter. It says a lot about the mind set of people today.
But I'm curious about the timeline. What money did he use when he set up the Cayman accounts? He was supposedly down there on business while they were on the cruise or did I misread that part. His fucking the company that tolerated Brad's actions was more than fair and leaving the specific amounts vague lets the reader fill in the appropriate amounts for themselves. From a mechanics POV, the author needs to go back and check placement of commas and periods because the fragments break up the rhythm and story flow.
Good read and thanks for your time and effort.
Tail End Pete
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Anonymous09/20/09
a happy ending
thre are some details i would have left out, but kept the underlying thought. they played, others played better and smarter.
Loved it... So many of the stories degrade one of the partners, often to a level that disgusts a civilized reader. I liked the thought in your letter and how you stuck it to the cheaters... Thanks
Can you craft a reply letter from the Skank? It would be amazing to see her pain regret and humiliation. Maybe even retrobution from her lover. Nothing physical mind you just plain ole pain. I'm not a sadist just a man with balls still intact. Lol
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Anonymous01/03/11
funny thing is
I imagined this as a DVD monologue - would be priceless
This probably the third time I'm reading this letter and laughing my head off. So similar to my divorce as well, as I was a "wimpy" and "unknowing" husband as well. True I could have beaten the "lover" and thrown the wife to the curb, but in the end I would have had to pay court costs plus, so being "wimpy" they paid for everything.
Great tool for rubbing it in and telling us. The husband and Tina definetly got them back 10 times over! Of course they would have discovered all this a piece at a time when they returned. That story would have been even better with the dialogue describing their thoughts and feelings. Still, entertaining as hell...
English
I don't know
if you can legally get away with this. But I hope you can. This was fun to read.
Funny
I have to admit this was a fun story to read.
good story and enjoyed the little tale
Great story, and interesting. I like to see bitches get what they deserve. Thanks
A Delightful Tale
that should be able to happen, but will not in fact occur. This, however, is fiction and suspension of disbelief is essential if you intend to read and enjoy the stories.
This. Was. AWESOME!!!!
You gotta love revenge served cold. 5 stars all the fucking way!!!
Fun but...
... some logic questions, would a jilted guy be so dumb as to document that he committed entrapment (or something like that) and the off shore bank account? Good fun though thanks for writing.
A Little Too Much Plotting
I have to say while I enjoyed reading this story, it was not up to your usual standards. It's not that I didn't like the storyline or what the husband did to the wife. I just thought it was over the top. While the wife did humiliate him and deserved what she got. I just got the feeling that he was somehow brought down to her level with all the plotting. Just a few of the things he did could have done the job nicely. I have loved all your other stories and usually rate them 100. I particularly loved 'Billy'.
hmmm... fun revenge
but maybe he shouldn't be stupid enough to provide his wife with enough evidence to put him in jail for fraud and theft. Duh
Good
Nice to see the story done a little differently.
I enjoyed it Thanks
Interesting story.
Very good. I liked it. A strong husband, that makes a change.
It is an old story
Retold a hundred times. Like sipping a good single malt whiskey it went smoothly. I enjoyed the fantasy but would have been much more preemptive and certainly would have restricted my letter to the first paragraph...
Never leave a paper trail!
It is dumb to confess anything anywhere anytime. I do have reservations on not getting a divorce. It may be of no concern if he stays out of country but has legal implications. If you are married, living together or not, the other spouse without your knowledge can use your line of credit, botrow large sums of money in your name, file tax returns in your name, and do a large variety of things without your knowledge or permission. A power of attorney is only really needed when one sells things with titles or such. Also she can as your wife file charges against you, seek civil charges, and you can be held responsible for her medical care and housing. Put another way, unless you just want to be a criminal on the run for the rest of your life not getting a divorce is very stupid idea. It really doesnt take much. A lawyer can file a divorce action and carry it thru without you even being there. But the letter in a divorce action could be used against you financially. Back to never leave a paper trail!
Fun to read despite plot holes . . .
I enjoyed the read; it was short, to the point, and fairly well written. But to get a power of attorney, one needs to have the document witnessed and notarized, so having the wife sign a piece of paper while recovering from an awesome fuck won't cut it. And of course, the letter provides evidence against Hubby as another commented. But it's just a story and it was done in a fairly original way (I've only seen a couple of other 'letters to my ex' in Literotica). It's nice to see a man who will stand up for himself and who won't put up with the cuckold humiliation. Thanks for writing.
Yes
I like it when a cheating slut whore gets FUCKED real goooood, and her stud big cock got it tooooo.--Good Read
Xtremely Silly....
Its amazing that a story like THIS is called realistic by the same folks who regard any other outcome as fantasy! LOL! Hey, revenge fantasies are satisfying, but this is pretty much nonsense.
Great fantasy ending!
Lots of plot issues but still a good fantasy ending to a slut wife / wimp husband story.
My poor poor Baby !
Are you feeling better now ?
What an ending
Well that is how all dreams should end. I do hope that you continue to write. I enjoyed this story very much.. and again I know it is just a story.
Poetic Justice At Its Best
O'Henry would have loved this story. This is poetic justice, by any standard. The cumulative pounding of the letter is like a jackhammer on concrete. It is designed to break things up. And what perfect targets!
This is an excellent read!
Fuck O'Herny...I loved it
It's what should happen to every cheating slut and the bastard they cheat with...KUDOS...Yea...Cheers...marriedwithballs@yah oo.com
Too bad you put it in writing
You had tremendous potential for a great story! You ruined it by making your story your own admission, in writing of all the things you did I still gave you a 50 because a lot of it was well done. Make the next one tighter, friend....the story, not the box you fuck!
The cold rage of revenge
I liked the cold rage which was the tone of delivering the details of the revenge. Previous comments reg. the dubious wisdom in disclosing all the where and how's of his revenge were correct.
It seems to me that the husband could have written the letter in a more ambiguous way, not allowing the authorities to tie him tie him to particular illegal activities, while at the same time leaving it clear enough for his ex to figure out that she is paying dearly for disrespecting and cheating on her husband, but just as much for making the fatal mistake of misjudging him as a wimp...
Still, I found that this potential legal vulnerability has not affected my ability to join with the husband in his crusade of revenge…
Aw come on guys
We all know the "letter" is only a mechanism to tell us the story. I enjoyed your story s-n-g. Nice plot, nicely written
Turnabout is fair play
I sure liked the plot. The cockhold gently turns it all around. I am almost sorry not to read what the wife's letter would have to say. A fine tongue in check humorous story.
I never quite understand these types of stories.
Although my first marriage partially broke up because of an affair my wife had with a buddy of mine while I was overseas in the service (I say "partially" because the marriage had more fundamental problems), what the hell, I had cheated, also. And, yes, I can understand the "size" thing, since my buddy was substantially better hung than myself. But I never quite understand the fascination with such degradation of the husband as is shown here. He's not a virile husband being cucked, he's just a wimp. What's the fascination in this? St. George killing the dragon has held our interest for centuries. But killing a dragonfly? (The story, itself, I think is well handled. The letter format can bring a great degree of intimacy and directness.)
Humorous
A great change of pace from what has been posted in the Loving Wifes area lately. Great story and well thought out.
Sent in a plain brown envelope
No return address, no forwarding address, well done. The lovers returned to find themselves completely fucked! Just as it should be.
great story
If only in real life this could happen that what makes a great story.It doesn't matter if it a man or woman there are pricks out there and it is good to see even if it only in a story them get payed back.
great story
If only in real life this could happen that what makes a great story.It doesn't matter if it a man or woman there are pricks out there and it is good to see even if it only in a story them get payed back.
Best Sort of Story!
My favorite brand of story, and a well-written one, at that!
Thanks- and I hope you'll treat us again along these lines in the future.
game set and match
the two were caught up in their own delusions and got soundly nailed. and the wife, so much for brad, where he cheated on his wife, why not her too ! a happy ending
Based on "Never leave a paper trail"
I'd like to see a sequel, one in which each gets what he/she deserves. Her for cheating and humiliating, and him for stealing what is legally her half of property and cash.
I know the readers here want blood and shredded bodies, but the more responsible want some sense of justice. Getting them fired, telling the families, and getting a settlement should suffice.
Rich
Would love to see...
Would love to see a sequel where that whore of a wife gets whats coming to her...but thats me :P
Some people have concerns with the paper trail
If you never come back to the states why worry, it isnt like you will extridited for over spending your credit cards. Yes the wife signed the power of attorney and the husband did to, they didnt bother to read, whose fault is that. Try breaking a contract when you havent read the fine print and see what a lawyer and judge do to you. The new couple isnt divorced so she was spending money on what amounts to her credit card but will leave it to her ex to pay the bills, nothing illegal there. He closed his joint cards nothing illegal there. He sold the house and furniture and used her share of the funds to pay off bills, this is iffy, but they arent divorced and she has no share to speak of. Paying off bills is actually a good thing. Moving his accounts out fo the country is iffy but it removes it from her lawyers touch. Moving it to two or three other untouchable countries would eliminate the paper trail. Suing the company and getting the guy fired was proper his actions brought it on himself and their is no problem there. Yes if they seek a divorce they could try to seek a share of the funds they lost but it would be almost impossible to trace and get. Again if they stay out of thee country and are careful where they go nothing will ever happen to the happy couple. Grow up folks the world is not a liberal politically correct place.
Short
I loved the story but it was a bit on the short side
Pretty Immature
Reads like a whiney little boy trying to get even. A real man would have let his actions speak for themselves. What's even more interesting is all the readers that really enjoyed the letter. It says a lot about the mind set of people today.
Thoughtful planning pays.
But I'm curious about the timeline. What money did he use when he set up the Cayman accounts? He was supposedly down there on business while they were on the cruise or did I misread that part. His fucking the company that tolerated Brad's actions was more than fair and leaving the specific amounts vague lets the reader fill in the appropriate amounts for themselves. From a mechanics POV, the author needs to go back and check placement of commas and periods because the fragments break up the rhythm and story flow.
Good read and thanks for your time and effort.
Tail End Pete
a happy ending
thre are some details i would have left out, but kept the underlying thought. they played, others played better and smarter.
Would have been far more interesting ...
as an actual story with actual dialog, than a rather tedious letter.
OMFG!!!!!
I FUCKING LOVED THIS SHIT!!!!!!! Awesome job. Thanks for sharing.
Fantastic...
Loved it... So many of the stories degrade one of the partners, often to a level that disgusts a civilized reader. I liked the thought in your letter and how you stuck it to the cheaters... Thanks
Sheeeeesh!
That sure didn't fit in with your pen name, now did it? LOL
Enjoyed your story. Thanks much.
WOW AMAZING
Can you craft a reply letter from the Skank? It would be amazing to see her pain regret and humiliation. Maybe even retrobution from her lover. Nothing physical mind you just plain ole pain. I'm not a sadist just a man with balls still intact. Lol
funny thing is
I imagined this as a DVD monologue - would be priceless
What a letter
This probably the third time I'm reading this letter and laughing my head off. So similar to my divorce as well, as I was a "wimpy" and "unknowing" husband as well. True I could have beaten the "lover" and thrown the wife to the curb, but in the end I would have had to pay court costs plus, so being "wimpy" they paid for everything.
BEST REVENGE EVER HA HA U FUCKING DAFT SLUT SHE AND HIM HAVE NOTHING LEFT
Hey Billy,
Are you really a German? Sweinhund??
Good one !!
Talk about a kick in the slats HAHAHAHAHAHA
Good story - made me laugh !!
Got to love it
Great tool for rubbing it in and telling us. The husband and Tina definetly got them back 10 times over! Of course they would have discovered all this a piece at a time when they returned. That story would have been even better with the dialogue describing their thoughts and feelings. Still, entertaining as hell...
Schmidt2 go back and read the story again...
The wronged husband and wife did nothing illegal so he was free to rub it in. Give the author a break, he knew what he was doing.
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