All Comments on 'First Time Oral Sex with My Girl'

I enjoyed this story. Don't pay much attention to those who didn't like it. I would guess English is not your native language, unless it is the British form of English.

You could use an editor to help clean things up.

Keep writing.

yes i have learned british english at school and college.

Well I also disagree with other readers, and I have liked your story alot, its indeed a good one , keep writting new stories.