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First Time Oral Sex with My Girl

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by Anonymous01/19/09

lgood story

I enjoyed this story. Don't pay much attention to those who didn't like it. I would guess English is not your native language, unless it is the British form of English.
You could use an editor to help clean things up.
Keep writing.

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by Anonymous01/26/09

thanks

yes i have learned british english at school and college.

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by Anonymous09/03/11

A Good Story

Well I also disagree with other readers, and I have liked your story alot, its indeed a good one , keep writting new stories.

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