All Comments on 'Eastern Bath House'

Nice idea, fast paced story, but oh boy oh boy do you need to proof read your stuff before you post. Some of it was incomprehensible

A well written story but certainly a bit too mild to be categorised under BDSM.It gives the impression that you have the middle eastern / arabian region as the location of this story. Very talented and promosing writing. Looking forward to read more from you for the lifestyle of this region.

Mr.Sam P.

(kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com

Please have someone proof read your entries. The mis-spelled words and sometimes bizarre sentence structure is a huge distraction.

Although it is true that you could use better grammar and sentence structure, the story is pretty hot, and the use of the second person can be very arousing.