Your wife LOST the bet? I don't think so. She got exactly what she wanted and you got what you wanted a total cum and fuck slut. but I guess being swingers it doesn't make any difference does it.
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Anonymous01/22/09
Don't ya just love it?
Write a story about any open relationships and here come the bible-thumpers! I guess these stories should only be submitted on Sunday when these good ol' boys are in church!
Good story and Fuck 'em if they don't approve of the lifestyle. :-)
Nice read IMO. Thank you for sharing your work. Ignore the morons below, it's a fantasy piece you morons!! I don't understand why people read categories like this and react that way? Like they don't know what the majority of the stories are about? The stupidity of the vocal commentary on this site is the main reason I don't post stories. Again thanks for sharing. I would recommend this story to anyone...
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Anonymous01/22/09
I'm not a bible thumper so fuck you.
I'm just a guy that looks at reality and a husband that wants his wife to fuck other men for him is a closet cocksucker. Now there's nothing wrong with being a male cocksucker. I had mine sucked by quite a few and some whose wife joined him at it. I still say that a husband who gets off on seeing his wife fuck other men is a cuckold closet sucking humiliated wannabee. There I didn't thump a bible one time...matter of fact I don't believe it. Matter of fact I think that all you closet cocksuckers that accuse all you detract as bible thumpers have a closet agenda. You can't bring yourself to do it so you get off by reading about it.marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
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Anonymous01/22/09
I don't know
what kind of people you are, but for sure you are a sick author. wanna play with me, if you loose we play gladiator and I also give you no chance to back off. and there will be only one way for you to end :-), dead. so if you only can live with hores, why don't you buy a brothel. this way you don't have to work to much (turn a normal woman into a tramp) and would have more choice. by the way did you tell her parents that they have now a hore as a daughter, well you could maybe tell them when you play your next chess game with her father and she could suck him off.
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Anonymous01/22/09
Enjoyable read
Well written. I hope you share more of her experiences with us soon.
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Anonymous01/22/09
All winners in this story
Great erotic tale, thanks for the effort and sharing. To "Rainbow": The damaged commenter you take to task has unfortunately left his sick mark all over Literotica. Clearly he uses this venue to exorcize his serious demons (which probably date to his childhood), compulsively reading every one of this type of story, undoubtedly jerking off to them, then transferring his guilt to the authors by these vicious public comments. We have to be grateful he's working it out here instead picking up, using, then assaulting prostitutes, which would be classic behaviour for this type of psycho. Pieater
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Anonymous01/22/09
Glad this was pure fantasy
Started out good but degenerated in the latter parts. This story is all about self serving lust on the hubby's part and degrading a naive wife. Nope, he doesn't love his wife.
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Anonymous01/22/09
Why did you read it?
You know the topic, the content and yet you read the story. To me that makes you the dumb ass. It's a 'STORY'. Hello? Fiction. Let me explain ..... James Bond is not real but there are spies. There is no Santa but we tell our kids there is. If you don't like the topic then fuck off.
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Anonymous01/22/09
Hey 'Anonymous on Earth'
Guess I didn't get the memo that announced your promotion from lavatory attendant to room monitor. The other guy didn't like this "STORY," fiction or not! Imagine that, someone, somewhere, doesn't like something you do. Perhaps that concept hasn't been explained to you. I sure hope your neck isn't hurting what with your head being so deeply buried up your ass.
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Anonymous01/22/09
To the Anon person on earth.
Did you check the profile? They are swingers. They both get off on doing this. That's what swingers do. Therefore the story is probably true and probably happened last night or the day before. The wife probably can't walk for being so fucked. But then again perhaps she is used to it. She was probably up and running and looking for her next fix the second she stopped cumming. Cum sluts to tend to recover quickly so I'm told.
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Anonymous01/23/09
You're Kidding
Right?
by
Anonymous02/17/09
100
Please keep writing. Some of the 'critics' here obviously need you to keep supplying them with stories to fuel their impotent rage and hypocrisy. Come and have a go at my stories you fuckwits and I'll sing you a little song about how much I care. Wanna hear it again?
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Anonymous03/02/09
ok
your paragraphs are wayyyy too long. makes it hard to read.
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Anonymous07/05/09
Loser
This guy is a loser. Basically, I think he secretly wants to see his wife fucked because he doesn't really feel like he gets it all for her and before she steps out, he comes up with an excuse to sex her out. If you really love your wife, that doesn't happen, if you're insecure, ya you're going to lose her and/or fuck up somewhere.
Notice how she didn't protest, he isn't totally giving her everything she needs, nothing needs to be said, hey extra marital sex with his approval...Gee, how difficult was this. Oh ya, I lost the bet...More Like "WON IT"
Oh well. A new cuckold is born every day. If you write another chapter, you definitely need to expose him for who he is. As for her, she doesn't seem to be complaining about not being satisfied and secretly thinking about a new man, maybe husband...Hell, she's got respectability and all the strange cock she wants...What a Life!
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Anonymous08/19/09
Lifestyle?
People talk about approving of a lifestyle, is your wife fucking around on you while you jack off a lifestyle? What the fuck do you call this lifestyle and how do I meet these hubbies who want their wives fucked. Personally I would prefer you go for a long walk or something but I suppose it's hard to jack off and walk so we could work something out. Your wife isn't a pig is she, cause I don't see a good looking woman doing this, she would just get a better man.
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Anonymous02/17/11
Great
Great story wish I was a part of it...
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Anonymous03/14/11
Completely unbelievable...
but I'm not saying it was bad or that I didn't enjoy the story. The story does seem to be lacking any real emotion and feelings. It'd be great to know if the wife will stay with the husband, if he changed her into a complete whore, or if she got pregnant. Also, how does the husband feel about this, besides being turned on?
English
That is some fantasy you there.
Your wife LOST the bet? I don't think so. She got exactly what she wanted and you got what you wanted a total cum and fuck slut. but I guess being swingers it doesn't make any difference does it.
Don't ya just love it?
Write a story about any open relationships and here come the bible-thumpers! I guess these stories should only be submitted on Sunday when these good ol' boys are in church!
Good story and Fuck 'em if they don't approve of the lifestyle. :-)
Nice Read
Nice read IMO. Thank you for sharing your work. Ignore the morons below, it's a fantasy piece you morons!! I don't understand why people read categories like this and react that way? Like they don't know what the majority of the stories are about? The stupidity of the vocal commentary on this site is the main reason I don't post stories. Again thanks for sharing. I would recommend this story to anyone...
I'm not a bible thumper so fuck you.
I'm just a guy that looks at reality and a husband that wants his wife to fuck other men for him is a closet cocksucker. Now there's nothing wrong with being a male cocksucker. I had mine sucked by quite a few and some whose wife joined him at it. I still say that a husband who gets off on seeing his wife fuck other men is a cuckold closet sucking humiliated wannabee. There I didn't thump a bible one time...matter of fact I don't believe it. Matter of fact I think that all you closet cocksuckers that accuse all you detract as bible thumpers have a closet agenda. You can't bring yourself to do it so you get off by reading about it.marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
I don't know
what kind of people you are, but for sure you are a sick author. wanna play with me, if you loose we play gladiator and I also give you no chance to back off. and there will be only one way for you to end :-), dead. so if you only can live with hores, why don't you buy a brothel. this way you don't have to work to much (turn a normal woman into a tramp) and would have more choice. by the way did you tell her parents that they have now a hore as a daughter, well you could maybe tell them when you play your next chess game with her father and she could suck him off.
Enjoyable read
Well written. I hope you share more of her experiences with us soon.
All winners in this story
Great erotic tale, thanks for the effort and sharing. To "Rainbow": The damaged commenter you take to task has unfortunately left his sick mark all over Literotica. Clearly he uses this venue to exorcize his serious demons (which probably date to his childhood), compulsively reading every one of this type of story, undoubtedly jerking off to them, then transferring his guilt to the authors by these vicious public comments. We have to be grateful he's working it out here instead picking up, using, then assaulting prostitutes, which would be classic behaviour for this type of psycho. Pieater
Glad this was pure fantasy
Started out good but degenerated in the latter parts. This story is all about self serving lust on the hubby's part and degrading a naive wife. Nope, he doesn't love his wife.
Why did you read it?
You know the topic, the content and yet you read the story. To me that makes you the dumb ass. It's a 'STORY'. Hello? Fiction. Let me explain ..... James Bond is not real but there are spies. There is no Santa but we tell our kids there is. If you don't like the topic then fuck off.
Hey 'Anonymous on Earth'
Guess I didn't get the memo that announced your promotion from lavatory attendant to room monitor. The other guy didn't like this "STORY," fiction or not! Imagine that, someone, somewhere, doesn't like something you do. Perhaps that concept hasn't been explained to you. I sure hope your neck isn't hurting what with your head being so deeply buried up your ass.
To the Anon person on earth.
Did you check the profile? They are swingers. They both get off on doing this. That's what swingers do. Therefore the story is probably true and probably happened last night or the day before. The wife probably can't walk for being so fucked. But then again perhaps she is used to it. She was probably up and running and looking for her next fix the second she stopped cumming. Cum sluts to tend to recover quickly so I'm told.
You're Kidding
Right?
100
Please keep writing. Some of the 'critics' here obviously need you to keep supplying them with stories to fuel their impotent rage and hypocrisy. Come and have a go at my stories you fuckwits and I'll sing you a little song about how much I care. Wanna hear it again?
ok
your paragraphs are wayyyy too long. makes it hard to read.
Loser
This guy is a loser. Basically, I think he secretly wants to see his wife fucked because he doesn't really feel like he gets it all for her and before she steps out, he comes up with an excuse to sex her out. If you really love your wife, that doesn't happen, if you're insecure, ya you're going to lose her and/or fuck up somewhere.
Notice how she didn't protest, he isn't totally giving her everything she needs, nothing needs to be said, hey extra marital sex with his approval...Gee, how difficult was this. Oh ya, I lost the bet...More Like "WON IT"
Oh well. A new cuckold is born every day. If you write another chapter, you definitely need to expose him for who he is. As for her, she doesn't seem to be complaining about not being satisfied and secretly thinking about a new man, maybe husband...Hell, she's got respectability and all the strange cock she wants...What a Life!
Lifestyle?
People talk about approving of a lifestyle, is your wife fucking around on you while you jack off a lifestyle? What the fuck do you call this lifestyle and how do I meet these hubbies who want their wives fucked. Personally I would prefer you go for a long walk or something but I suppose it's hard to jack off and walk so we could work something out. Your wife isn't a pig is she, cause I don't see a good looking woman doing this, she would just get a better man.
Great
Great story wish I was a part of it...
Completely unbelievable...
but I'm not saying it was bad or that I didn't enjoy the story. The story does seem to be lacking any real emotion and feelings. It'd be great to know if the wife will stay with the husband, if he changed her into a complete whore, or if she got pregnant. Also, how does the husband feel about this, besides being turned on?
I rated it 1*.
I didn't know what to expect but when I found out that the husband was a homosexual by wanting another man to fuck his wife, I stopped reading.
More, plese!
Hot story, hope there is much more!
MORE PLEASE!
I had to copy the other subject line.
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