by JackLuis
Jack, you ask if we preferred the shorter or the longer chapters. My own request would be for the shorter. There's a certain amount of excitement in each session -- this is more than a sex novel -- and if the chapter is too long the excitement drops off a bit. BUT, keep 'em coming! I love the series.
I would like to see longer chapters and definitely more story content. The sex is great but it is hard to rate a short snippet very high based on sex alone. When you started to weave a storyline around the house hidden in a bunker, I was interested but the story went nowhere but to a couple of sex scenes. I would like it better if you could combine multiple chapters.
I do want to thank you for writing stories such as this. I have tried a couple of times but have never gotten anything up to where I think it could be published.
Ken