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Excellent!
Nice lead in to the rest of the story. A good background is important to help a story develop and you did it right. All the main characters have had major troubles, now it's time for something to go right.
What???!!!!!!
Okay. No clue was provided as to why there are two apparently unrelated vignettes posted, but I was willing to wait for some sort of logical connection to appear. If there was going to be a "Ch.02", it would have been nice to have been given a "Ch.01" designation. And then, in the second vignette, the storytelling just stops. It does not end; it stops. Did "page 2" just get lost in the ether? Regardless, the whole posting is similar to a song with a no ending chord.
-- KK in Texas
My mistake ...
in posting the chapters without giving them designated numbers.
I already have that request in to correct the issue.
Good story
How many chapters in all? I'm not real big on chapter stories and sometime read them after a few are posted. Got me kid of hooked on this one.
DG
Thanks***
For sharing.
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