Apparently, there aren't very many writers who understand how to write a Valentine's Day story. Throwing in the words Valentine's Day and adding the detail about a Saint Valentine's medal does not make for a Valentine's Day story.
Sorry, but I can't score your story better than the score I gave you, not to mention that it was just too damn short or maybe that was a good thing.
I disagree with the other comment, this IS a Valentine's Day story, just not one with the typical romance in it. It's a story of love for humanity though.
It was a bit creepy, but really well done. Not a typical hearts and flowers romance, but a Valentine's Day story nevertheless. Good luck in the contest.
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Anonymous01/31/09
Very well done
I really enjoyed the story. It had a nice twist at the end. Thanks
I liked it very much and look forward to extensions of your other stories about Gabriel and Sebastian as well as a continuation of "Shadows and Light". You are good at mixing erotic and also a good story around. Keep it up!
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Anonymous08/05/16
Are you serious?!?
Why in the name of all that's holy haven't I come across you before? Even though I deduced she was a ghost before the end, the story was f-ing great!
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This is not a Valentine's Day story
Apparently, there aren't very many writers who understand how to write a Valentine's Day story. Throwing in the words Valentine's Day and adding the detail about a Saint Valentine's medal does not make for a Valentine's Day story.
Sorry, but I can't score your story better than the score I gave you, not to mention that it was just too damn short or maybe that was a good thing.
Beautiful
I disagree with the other comment, this IS a Valentine's Day story, just not one with the typical romance in it. It's a story of love for humanity though.
It's beautifully written and very touching.
Oh, shut up, idiot number one. Everyone deserves
a chance. I really felt this story. It was simple, creepy and pretty touching. Good work on this one, ED. Will be reading it again sometime soon(:
Good luck in the contest!
~ Imp (Alessia Brio)
I Liked It
Even if I did figure it out early. It wasn't the usual love story but it was a love story. Thank you and good luck.
Unusual
Well written and although it was an old theme(Wel there aint nothing new under the sun) It was handled well. Good luck
Very well written
Very well written. Great dialogue.
Good luck in the contest.
Wow!
I really loved this story alot. It was great and loved the story line. Good Luck.
Awesome story
Good characters, excellent descriptions, and I didn't expect the ending. Keep it up.
creepy yet nice
A short and sweet story!
wonderfull
i love this story, very well done
Misty Eyed
The story was short, sweet and well written. Good luck.
I really liked this.
It was a bit creepy, but really well done. Not a typical hearts and flowers romance, but a Valentine's Day story nevertheless. Good luck in the contest.
Very well done
I really enjoyed the story. It had a nice twist at the end. Thanks
Awesome!
Loved this short little story!
I hope I get to read some more from you.
~Nightime
Lovely story!
I liked it very much and look forward to extensions of your other stories about Gabriel and Sebastian as well as a continuation of "Shadows and Light". You are good at mixing erotic and also a good story around. Keep it up!
Are you serious?!?
Why in the name of all that's holy haven't I come across you before? Even though I deduced she was a ghost before the end, the story was f-ing great!
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