All Comments on 'Change in Plans'

Apparently, there aren't very many writers who understand how to write a Valentine's Day story. Throwing in the words Valentine's Day and adding the detail about a Saint Valentine's medal does not make for a Valentine's Day story.

Sorry, but I can't score your story better than the score I gave you, not to mention that it was just too damn short or maybe that was a good thing.

I disagree with the other comment, this IS a Valentine's Day story, just not one with the typical romance in it. It's a story of love for humanity though.

It's beautifully written and very touching.

a chance. I really felt this story. It was simple, creepy and pretty touching. Good work on this one, ED. Will be reading it again sometime soon(: <3 Lil, KR.

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

Even if I did figure it out early. It wasn't the usual love story but it was a love story. Thank you and good luck.

Well written and although it was an old theme(Wel there aint nothing new under the sun) It was handled well. Good luck

Very well written. Great dialogue.

Good luck in the contest.

I really loved this story alot. It was great and loved the story line. Good Luck.

Good characters, excellent descriptions, and I didn't expect the ending. Keep it up.

A short and sweet story!

i love this story, very well done

The story was short, sweet and well written. Good luck.

It was a bit creepy, but really well done. Not a typical hearts and flowers romance, but a Valentine's Day story nevertheless. Good luck in the contest.

I really enjoyed the story. It had a nice twist at the end. Thanks

Loved this short little story!

I hope I get to read some more from you.

~Nightime

I liked it very much and look forward to extensions of your other stories about Gabriel and Sebastian as well as a continuation of "Shadows and Light". You are good at mixing erotic and also a good story around. Keep it up!

Why in the name of all that's holy haven't I come across you before? Even though I deduced she was a ghost before the end, the story was f-ing great!