All Comments on 'The Gentlemen's Club Ch. 02'

Really enjoyed your story ... a few errors in grammer/spelling ... but enjoyable. Keep it going ...

Fantasy Island!

I agree there were spelling and grammatical errors in the first two chapters. I personally don't read with my red pen marking the errors. To the second commenter, of course it's a fantasy. Most of the writing on here is fantasy. If it's not, it will usually tell you. If you're looking for reality, find another site.

To the writer, I liked chapter 1 better, but I still did like this chapter. I can't wait to read the third installment.