All Comments on 'A Special Gift Ch. 02'

You did an awesome job on this story. You placed her in an interesting situation but not a degrading or threatening situation. Very well written. I look forward to reading your other stories. Jim

the love between them radiated through the computer screen. very different and a welcome treat from the usual mc stories.maybe it would be good to have the husband be the slave next? very enjoyable pops1943

I think you wrote it quickly and didn't wait to read it critically. Then next time you write it will be much more descriptive and erotic. No idea why I say that, it just feels like there is good stuff in there.

Congrats

Greg