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The Ballad of Bob Darrell

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by Anonymous

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by Angeline01/22/09

I like rhyme!

And this is a bittersweet tale told beautifully. The subject really seems to fit the form.

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by annaswirls01/22/09

yes!

I do not like rhyme, but this really works! Well done!

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by Safe_Bet01/22/09

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This poem was mentioned in the Jan 22nd New Poetry Review. Great job. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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by NorthernPA4U01/25/09

An excellent ballad

This is a wonderful story, plucking at one's heartstrings at the end. The meter and rhyming scheme is excellent ... wow! Very well done.

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by Anonymous01/25/09

Hooray for the ballad!

I wish we'd see more ballads in modern poetry. If we did, I don't think poetry would be seen as elitist as it is viewed by some. There is a place for song and story in modern poetry, and this is a great example.

I also liked how economical you were with words; some ballads go on too long. Great work!

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by ishtat01/26/09

fun read

I suspect you had fun writing this, as much as I did reading it

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by GuiltyPleasure03/07/09

You did it again!

Spot on! Not an easy form to pull off well, you held my attention to the last line.

Tess

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