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Good Start
This was really hot. One small thing you when from 1st person to 3rd person and back to 1st by the end. Please continue
just something for you
to delete. as I can see you have one, I repete 1 admirer. the rest must have been deleted. if you can't handle that other people think different than you, why don't you go to russia and try it there. maybe somebody else will delete you. this is still an open country where everbody can say what he thinks.
To Anon....You're wrong!
This may be an open country, but one must still live within the rules. The rules for public feedback on this site are, I quote: "Any off topic messages, personal attacks, or other similar stuff will be removed. The author and webmaster reserve the right to remove any comment for any reason."
Too often, "feedbacks" on this site, contain vial and abusive language against the author or other readers whose opinion differ from others. Readers have been called "idiots" or "morons" by "0" givers and negative criticizers.Authors put a lot of effort and time into a story and deserve better. If the genre is not to your liking, don't read it. "Splendid Spunk", although this is not my type of story I will give you credit for writing it.More authors should use the "delete" button, maybe it will stop this crap that's being written in the "Public Feedback".
50% or less gets you deleted?
Yep, the author has the right to delete comments less than their stellar expectations and the "public" has a right to make such comments. However, if the story, prose and character development is as bad as many of these stories are, then they deserve the positive or negative feedback that the "public" has to offer. This author's efforts are no exception to the rule however, it appears that unless the written comments are at a threshold of 50%, they get deleted. Hmmm, must be a lot of deleted comments compared to the "public" who cared to comment anything above 50% [like 1 in this author's case, as of this moment]. Hmmm, you do not have to be a rocket scientist to analyze those results. If you have a different opinion, bring it on! John
To the Sithead
I love the courage of the anon writer who now feels he/she/it knows that comments have been deleted. By rights I should delete anything not relevant to the story - but , and this may be difficult for those who are too frightened of their own shadows - I DO NOT DELETE . So go to Russia, I don't give a shit, like the damn story, hate the damn story it is your right, just speak about the story not what you 'think' because what you write tells me you do not think much if at all. Try not being an ass for once in your life and who knows, you might find a friend
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new style... but sexy...
i relally do!!
and for yll you complaining on authours remoing comments... fuck off until you show your name and dont send anonymous...
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