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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/25/09

I want more!!!

This is the type of story that had me wanting to be Damien, lucky guy. Your writing skills are good, just be careful w/ the adjectives. Sometimes we can get a little carried away, but you set a nice tone and the imagery is what kept me going. I love it.

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by digdaddyrich01/26/09

It reads like she is really needing sex

But what about the package?

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