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Vow To My Princess

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by Anonymous

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by impressive01/22/09

Good luck in the contest!

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

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by PrincessErin01/23/09

Good

A few parts of the story could be improved on, especially her physical description (40G with a thin waist is not possible). I also found it weird that she was talking to his parents and the whole idea of waiting until marriage for sex.

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by Anonymous01/27/09

Decent

The sex part is fun, but the rest is hard to follow. It was not clear what was going on in the beginning.

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by Anonymous08/23/09

:)

Wow :) Me and my boyfriend share the same opinion :) We do just about everything except go all the way since we're saving that for our honeymoon :)

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