All Comments on 'A Box of Chocolates'

I loved it. It was very creative. My only complaint is that instead of posting this to romance, it should have been posted to mind control.

Good job.

Truly, it's a cute plot line (albeit a bit predictable), but as posted, the tale is in serious need of an editor.

Keep writing, but get some assistance before finalizing the story.

-- KK in Texas

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

Great job!

I loved the fact that it wasn't just about the sex, that Lisa was looking for more then that. I also like the fact that you just hinted at the fact that she was a bigger girl, and didn't just say she was.

All shapes all sizes all types there is always someone out there who loves you for who you are!

kudos loved it!

I did enjoy the story but there were a few spelling and grammar errors that distracted from the purpose.

I like a little witchcraft, and sex together, makes for a good story. Thanks

The romantic love this gal finds with a guy who truly adores her requires her to learn that a vain Adonis is not the answer, nor any other self-centered jerk. The magic chocolate is the secret, ain't it? A fun story!

a lovely story of awakening! made me realise one or two things about myself too thank you x

Wow romantic and sweet, so unlike you. You must be heading to a new phase of your life. I like this but don't lose too much of the old you.

Keep writing and good luck in the contest.

I though I knew how this story was going to go. I didn't. Thank you for showing even a Valentine's story can still surprise us. And thank you for the message, while I'm at it.

That was a fun little story. I enjoyed reading it.

What a good story!

Nice fable.

IF it was a romance she would have loved tyler, but she became as selfish as the two dick heads. Tyler find someone worthy...

I very much liked this story. The old man's warning was just subtle enough to set me to wondering. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.