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You are a Liar

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by tiffnhoney01/24/09

especially enjoyed the first lines

Honestly, I didn't really 'get into' the way it ended...I just didn't feel it as strongly. I suspect it is me and not your writing. I enjoyed it overall. I especially like the opening lines. They drew me into the poem and I immediately connected... "listen to her story,and my heart bleeds black ink. More of your lies letter themselves into the history between us," I loved that part...nice.

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