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goodness
this is my favorite of your last couple.
This is lovely
and you got the form just right. :-)
somehow you made me think like a brick...
Fantastic form...and wonderful how something so concisely written can actually make you think from the perspective of a brick wall. Great :)
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This is wonderful I am using it as a study piece to try and get mine right!
Thought provoking
I thought this was an excellent combination of the form and trigger.
It was much more thought provoking than I would have imagined someone could get with this combination.
ohhhhh......
you took me back to my +home+....my garden. I miss it,so much
loved your poem, BTW
xox
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