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Depths of Pain

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by Anonymous

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by 01/25/09

I May Be Biased...

but I like it very much! LOL You flatter me, SB. I hope you enjoyed making this poem as much as I enjoyed reading it.

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by Angeline01/25/09

You did a great job

pulling these lines together into a cento. And it's a good poem until the reader gets to this line: "I embrace what is flawed and right," which is just perfectly placed and gives the whole piece depth and meaning. Wonderful work, gf! xo, S.

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by ishtat01/26/09

!

Nothing much to add to the previous comment by Angeline except that I've just read through a dozen or more of your poems and you really are improving a lot. That isn't meant to be patronising at all and I hope it doesn't sound so.

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