All Comments on 'Rachel's Porn Shoot'

Do you ever go back and reread your own stuff? This was appalingly written.

This may not a well-written story. But still awesome. The sex is convincing and the moral is heart-breaking. I hope you will write more about CJ's adventure. Perhaps including black-mailing Rachel, or another model wannabe. If you dom please consider writing similar story about Japanese model like Akina Minami, Nanami Sakuraba or Keiko Kitagawa. Thanks

Max

This was one of the stupidest stories I have read on this site. Poorly written and lacking in substance