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by Safe_Bet01/25/09

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This poem was mentioned in the Sunday January 25th, 2009 New Poetry Review. Thank you for sharing you wonderful work with us. You can read the review in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum found here: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=25415 7

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by ishtat01/26/09

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I like this ,it has a sort of calm economy of words which make it more convincing. perhaps a little pruning could be done here and there but that might be a little picky

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