All Comments on 'Ghazal in Thirteen'

This poem was mentioned in the Sunday January 25th, 2009 New Poetry Review. Thank you for sharing you wonderful work with us. You can read the review in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum found here: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=254157

This is very vivid, excellent work. I kowtow before you.

you picked the perfect phrase for repeating... it does not get annoying like some repetition at all... it gets stronger as the poem goes, building.