All Comments on 'Perfect Lover becomes Perfect PAL'

More please keep writing this is better than porn!

If she doesn't actually let him fuck her ass before long say 3 months, he should dump her or cheat on her with a hot younger chick and give her self esteem a good blow. she seems to think every dude out their is willing to lick her pussy and ass and dosen't know how lucky she is.

What a fantastic tale you wove. Interesting that she already had him rimming her at will, but used her ass to stop giving him blow-jobs so he could have her ass. Loved that twist and wished I were he.

What a selfish (self-admitted) bitch. As much as I enjoy tonguing pussy and ass, there's no way I could take her arrogance on a regular basis.

As the author, I feel you missed much by limiting her description of just how his tongue felt, and never having him contribute to the narrative, especially expressing the delightful taste and scent he enjoyed to make his efforts worthwhile.