A clever story, and with a bit more editing could be even better.
We had a Hillman Hunter when I was growing up. They're notorious for having problems in the clutch department, so it wasn't at all surprising when you made Hillman (l)Imp :-)
though perhaps it belongs in humour and satire. Though the less than beautiful ford anglia didn't quite do it for me; desperately tried to fit anglia to her maiden name. But I think that would have been too hard. Perhapd Morris Oxford might have worked better. Tried playing with sunbeam Talbot oo, but it didn't work - though it did, i think, have the same frame as the hillman.
Badge engineeting. But then where were the reciprocating pistons?
A
Not bad except for the names of vehicles used instead of proper names which made me want to get in my Mercedes and take her for a ride!
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Anonymous07/08/10
Too Cute
Was this a Matchless Triumph? Only the Black Shadow knows.
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Anonymous10/23/10
to jumpy
you left alot out like at the beach one second they are in the car then suddenly by magic they are on the beach and screwing where'd the car go did they jump out while driving way to rushed slow down and make sure you transition between scenes properly AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING
English
The puns, the puns!
A clever story, and with a bit more editing could be even better.
We had a Hillman Hunter when I was growing up. They're notorious for having problems in the clutch department, so it wasn't at all surprising when you made Hillman (l)Imp :-)
Made me laugh...
though perhaps it belongs in humour and satire. Though the less than beautiful ford anglia didn't quite do it for me; desperately tried to fit anglia to her maiden name. But I think that would have been too hard. Perhapd Morris Oxford might have worked better. Tried playing with sunbeam Talbot oo, but it didn't work - though it did, i think, have the same frame as the hillman.
Badge engineeting. But then where were the reciprocating pistons?
A
She could have called the baby MG
A nice little story and I liked reading it very much.Thanks for the story....Rich
Nice, light, humorous...
Another good tale. Thanks for sharing it.
If the baby had been a girl...
she'd have been a real Minx
No Elise?
Not bad except for the names of vehicles used instead of proper names which made me want to get in my Mercedes and take her for a ride!
Too Cute
Was this a Matchless Triumph? Only the Black Shadow knows.
to jumpy
you left alot out like at the beach one second they are in the car then suddenly by magic they are on the beach and screwing where'd the car go did they jump out while driving way to rushed slow down and make sure you transition between scenes properly AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING
ha
read it with a smile
Anglia Ford, Ford Anglia. Punny. She's a gold digger.
got the motors running
bit of a fun story based on old cars.....but what about a bentley or rolls....
got the right title...DESPERATE
BIGGEST LOAD OF CRAP EVER...
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