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by Maria239401/29/09

ha ha :)

I went through sheer HELL with my girls about that sugary crap. Never, never would I buy Pebbles, and they would scream... okay, I loved your poem, it sent me back, ya know, my kids are grown. Keep up the good work :)

IN particular, since the first part was sorry as far as FB goes, your word choices are good, I loved the similar sounds, you did a good job, hell, a great job with your imagery.

~m

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