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Desert Haiku

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by Anonymous

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by 02/25/09

nice haiku, SB!

I like the contrast between shimmers and dust...
I need to catch up on my poetry reading. Seems like you've been producing some great stuff!

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by GuiltyPleasure03/06/09

Nicely done.

I like the imagery invoked and the words you chose.

Tess

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