All Comments on 'A Mosquito's Life'

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AngelineAngelineabout 15 years ago
Very cute and funny!

You made the form work for you and packed a lot of info about that buzzy little pest into your few, well-chosen words. Nice work, A. xo, S.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
thanks for the read!

Hi! Your poem has been mentioned in today's New Poem Reviews: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.p hp?t=254157&page=129

Maria2394Maria2394about 15 years ago
delightful!

reminds me of my cricket poem. You sure have blossomed in your writing, UYS and I have enjoyed watching you grow.

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