All Comments on 'Jasmine'

I really liked this story. I hope you add another chapter. I would love to see what happens next. It was HOT.

Aren't there any eitors reviewing stories prior to posting. Extremely too frequent and improperly use ... by authors is geting posted. Seem some feel its proper grammer to use ... in 70-90% of their sentences. Such stupidity as I...I...I... or no...no...no...no just kills reading and increases confusion.

I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read some of the others you have posted on Lit! CherryOT

Amazing story, but have someone edit before you post. The grammatical errors really detract from your story and distract the reader.