All Comments on 'Dad Takes Daughter'

why didn't he fuck her? great build up, but unless there's a sequil I am very dissapointed

daisy

wuts the point of the story...its 2 short and not enough

Hi Victoria,

I`m agreeing with the others. I want more. But then maybe that was your purpose. To leave us wanting more. If so you were most sucessful.

there was enough to make my prick hard and it is stillhard cause I`m imagining Daddy eating her cunt and Daughter sucking his prick

Thanks for the hardon victoria.

JohnP

Well done Victoria. Incidently, I have a daughter named Victoria. She has turned into a beautiful woman and has driven me nuts for years now. Thanks to you for the insperation to goto to her. We both loved each other like there was no tomorrow.

Victor,

Want More! PleasE?!

You began to get there but then quit while your reader was just getting hot. Obviously dad didn't want to fuck as much as his daughter did. A bit unrealistic and disappointing . . .

this story was shit!!!!!!!!! and to the canadian guy who said he had a daughter called victoria and "you loved each other for years" or what ever nonsense you typed, don't talk so much shite, your probably imagining you have a daughter with the same name you sad fat arsehole, god some of the comments on this website make me laugh so hard as it just shows how desperate you all are to get off, i like skipping the stories and reading your pathetic comments as you all sound like pathetic wankers

Just like everybody else puts it clear, the story is too short and leaves your reader/target yearning for me. I personally tried to find the 'second' page. Need more work and creativity

Very good & very hot for a short story,

This could have been longer & much more erotic

i love the way my daughters feet smell.

and the author cannot write good english

I wish you were my daddy and I wish you wouldn't stop there

God why can't you be my daddy. I'd let you take me in a heartbeat.

my cock would be inside that pussy

God I wish I was that girl.... My cunny is so wet from the story...

So many paedophiles on here, bet a lot of u have fucked ur daughter, wrong uns

been screwing my daddy for many yrs now many yrs. and I love every time he does,dawny lynn

normally i've loathe stories that get down business so quickly than suddenly

powwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww already over .............. THIS GOOD

- - REALLY GOOD LIKE EXCELLENT

I want my daddy to fuck me and play with me like this

Although he didn't fuck her in the story I'm quite sure that he probably did soon after that night

That's what happened to me after my daddy fucked me in a motel room that we shared at a out of town wedding

I left the reception and went to the room where I removed my dress and underwear and got ready for bed.

There was two queen beds in the room and I got under the covers and quickly fell asleep.

A couple of hours later my daddy came in the room and made enough noise that he woke me up.

I turned around away from him and went back to sleep. I felt the bed moving and he was getting into bed with me

He was pretty drunk and I could smell the alcohol on his breath.

He turned me around so that I was facing him and brought his mouth to mine and kissed me.

I tried to get him to stop but he overpowered me and before I knew it I was laying on my back and he was laying on top of me.

I felt his rock hard penis poking at my vagina and before I could stop him he put his cock inside of me and fucked me like I was one of his sluts that he fucked on a regular basis.

I couldn't stop him so I decided to let him fuck me and he did for a few minutes then he came inside of me

When I felt the warm seman spurting inside of me I knew that it wasn't going to be the only time that it would happen.

It was the start of many times that I let him fuck me and it wasn't long after that I found out that I was pregnant with his baby

We've been together for almost two years now and I had a healthy baby girl and I'm pregnant again with our second one.

Just go's to show you that once it happens there's no reason to stop.

Daddy can use my pussy anytime he wants

too short, should have fucked or at leased cuddled together and sleept to fuck in the morning

Too short but good

It would have been better if it had been longer and he actually got more than just his fingers in her.