by sweetnsassy1
Loved this story--it was sensual without being smut. Wish I had a hot friend like Brian ;)
This is really gripping stuff -- the build up of their relationship is nicely handled and the final shift into a sexual connection comes across as entirely natural, with quite steamy descriptions. Perfect for Valentine's Day.
We really liked and then loved the story of two hearts finally finding each other. The story could have developed a bit more for the characters gradually developing and the. Hiding their feelings for each other. It was the last line that was unnecessary and seemed very immature and a bit out of context; “a Valentine’s Day to remember”.
What about finally and forever and ever, and to the moon and back, and I have always loved you; etc…..