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Midnight Chocolate

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by Anonymous

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by Sapphos Sister01/31/09

A glimpse into their intimacy

This poem is liked a snatched glimpse of a moment of intense privacy. The language used is pitch-perfect and not a word is wasted.

Fx

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by jthserra02/17/11

sharpened slivers of sound

this one slices through you... well done



jth : )

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by demure10107/07/12

sweeter than anything you could think of!

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