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All Comments on 'Midnight Chocolate'

by DawnJ

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Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterabout 15 years ago
A glimpse into their intimacy

This poem is liked a snatched glimpse of a moment of intense privacy. The language used is pitch-perfect and not a word is wasted.

Fx

jthserrajthserraabout 13 years ago
sharpened slivers of sound

this one slices through you... well done

jth : )

demure101demure101almost 12 years ago

sweeter than anything you could think of!

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