All Comments on 'Birthday in the Mansion'

Well, this is a different take on a Valentine Day story, using the Letter/Transcript category.

I enjoyed reading your story.

Good luck in the contest.

Very creatively done. Good job.

Hello Yours SINserely,

Well you got me on this one!After i read a lesson on Greene

well part of it i was wonderin' where in hellz the sex?

Luckily along came Bill.... Literally!

So I am thinkin' any paragraph now she's gonna talk about the great time she had giving the birthday guy his bj. an it never happened.

A pretty good story though, it did leave a surprise at the end. Take care!

"R your heels safe from the "Shoeslayer?"

Hello Yours SINserely,

Well you got me on this one!After i read a lesson on Greene

well part of it i was wonderin' where in hellz the sex?

Luckily along came Bill.... Literally!

So I am thinkin' any paragraph now she's gonna talk about the great time she had giving the birthday guy his bj. an it never happened.

A pretty good story though, it did leave a surprise at the end. Take care!

"R your heels safe from the "Shoeslayer?"

So, I was wondering if you were writing about Rumson, NJ. Yup, HUUGE houses! Then, I saw your story about the new guy in your life. I'm thinking I am probably correct in that assumption? Former Jersey girl here :) Now I have to go read the sequel and see how the birthday gift goes. I love how conversational the letter is!

~Luna