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My Sweet Elizabeth

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/03/09

Well written!

A heartbreaking story! I hope you´ll see her again some day.

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by musingsalone02/03/09

Beautiful

Lovely.

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by Anonymous02/04/09

Good

Good story. From what I've read on this site, the best stories have been without chapters. :-)

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by Anonymous04/20/09

started good

it started good but you really screwed up by not marrying her although it seems she was just a tease and never really loved you other wise she would have said something when you started dating and i really wonder about your feelings for her because if you loved her as much as you say then you would not have ever started dating and would have pushed to get married instead of just pushing it off so if your life is screwed up it is all your own fault as i said this started out good but became unrealistic toward the middle i hope you learned your lesson not to put things off

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