All Comments on 'Broken Down, Built Back Up Ch. 01'

no fantasy.

It was a turn of events when Diane locked her girlfriend in the bathroom stall knowing what was going to happen to her...that was cool!

How much cum can a girl drink? I've seen pics of bukakke girls drinking quarts of the nasty stuff but this story could definitely set a record. She could go for a gallon...LOL!!----malapulga@yahoo.com

Don't know about this one. On one level it did turn me on, but I found it a little rushed. Will be interested to see what the other chapters turn out like

The story hasn't seemed real yet, not saying with a little more background information that it won't. I like the story line and think with another chapter the characters will feel real when read. I gave it 100% because I like the theme and the writing is good, just not enough to make it real. Thanks for the post

That was very hot! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Gloryholes is a subject rarely covered on Lit. and to combine with bondage, excellent, it made a nice read. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you are already writing it :-)