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Nice Chapter
That was a nice chapter to the serious problem was it that it was anticlimactic in parts during the series. The other problem is that you left it and doing before the marriage. This could have been a longer series with the marriage and the honeymoon.
Good
I liked the story very much, it was tender and showed a lot of love. Despite what editorial criticism that has been received, the story itself excellent. Keep on writing.
Its way too lovey dovey and no man talk like that. 2weeks or so and marriged? Doesn't seem realistic.
A lovelly romance
I am surprised to find no previous comments,
A good story which grew nicelly, I think her heart Problem may have been overdoing it but it is your story and I did enjoy IT.
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