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Refreshing
Good story - I enjoyed this. Keep up with more submissions please! And it was so refreshing to read a story actually written in "English"!
Enjoyed the story and the style
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and would love a sequel to see if Mark had figured out how he might become the one to satisfy the voracious Janice.
excellent start
An excellent start Beastie. I like your unashamed use of Scots idiom, though some readers may be unaware of it. Keep at it please, you'll get even better in time.
Excellent start to your literary career
Well done on a readable, well written and witty piece. The nom de plume is a master'stroke' and I especially loved the English phrases dotted throughout such as 'Jammy, Jammy sod'. The hint of humour at the end with the oversight as to the taping was an added bonus. ;-)
Excellent
Very nice start ... I cant wait to see if there is more from this trio.
Thanks for an excellent read!
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