All Comments on 'Of Raptors, Dust specks, and Lovers'

by annaswirls

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 15 years ago
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You did it! and so well too I am so jealous!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
well done!

This poem is mentioned in Monday's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

AngelineAngelineabout 15 years ago
Excellent tanka!

I don't really know the form that well so can't comment on that (though it looks right to me), but the poem is just beautiful. Pithy, as it needs to be, but says a lot and with a kind of raw honesty that really is gorgeous. It's so good to read you again. I'd forgotten what a unique, wonderful poet's voice you have. Well not forgot exactly, but you know what I mean.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 15 years ago
Sweet....

Perfectly done, as usual. I'm just in awe of your writing lately.

Tess

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