All Comments on 'Where Honeysuckle Climbs'

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
Gooder than good

I liked it because it was written well, UYS.

Maria2394Maria2394about 15 years ago
melancholy

yet tenderly beautiful. enjoyed very much

AngelineAngelineabout 15 years ago
It's beautiful blank verse!

You did a great job of getting the flowers and corpses line in it in a unique way that fits the theme of the poem really well. I think the poem would be well-served by breaking it into two or three sections--it wouldn't feel like you're covering so much territory in such a small space then--but in all honesty I don't remember whether it's ok to do that with a blank verse poem, so I say it with some reservations. But it's really good, beautifully written.

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersabout 15 years ago
Lovely, UYS

Really elegant meter.

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