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A Refusal, A Phobia: Mine

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by bflagsst02/03/09

i liked it

The only reason I didn't give it a fiver was because the tenses in "Running giggling cheerful chatty" didn't seem to flow. Not that the tenses are wrong, they just seem off for the flow of the poem.

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