Well written and a good piece of work - the issue would be with them being cheaters and of course that is bad - But it is not about your writing skills -
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yep - nice story - bad characters
Well written and a good piece of work - the issue would be with them being cheaters and of course that is bad -
But it is not about your writing skills -
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