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by Anonymous02/06/09

Good

I liked your story quite a bit, it was clearly well written and you have a great way with words. I'm not sure how this is considered non-con/reluctance though.

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by rgraham66602/06/09

Very nice

Very well written. I quite enjoyed the breadth of your vocabulary, the way you used it to infuse the story with emotions.

Looking forward to the next part of this tale.

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by Nellskitchen07/08/09

Felt like I was there...

...in bed with both of you. Hot. Dirty. Passion at its best - Vicki

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