Missy you most definetly have a talent for providing details for the imagination to work overtime. Your character's emotional ride is very well orchestrated and developed. Do consider on broadening this exchange and brining in the dominant force that seems to be leaving the instructions. Will continue to look for further stories.
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More!
Very nice, Missy. I enjoyed this... but I think you should really continue this story. Perhaps have Him find her? I'd like to see what happens.
- masked_author
Great story!
Wonderful job!
Intriguing and erotic! Very arousing--
Great story!
Wonderful job!
Intriguing and erotic! Very arousing--
Tantalizing
As always, I enjoy the build up and the way you tease us along for the ride. Keep up the great work.
A very nice slow burn
Missy you most definetly have a talent for providing details for the imagination to work overtime. Your character's emotional ride is very well orchestrated and developed. Do consider on broadening this exchange and brining in the dominant force that seems to be leaving the instructions. Will continue to look for further stories.
Brings you to the brink
What a buildup! Please finish it!!!!!
You really have to proof read your stories. You have problems with using "too" instead of "to"
Still a great story!
It's a common mistake amoung writers to use "Too instead of To", but that didn't stop me from reading your story. Thank you for sharing. :)
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