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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Cute

I thought this was a really cute, sweet story. I would recommend a second set of eyes to review, though. There were a few times where the verb tense changed and that made it a little confusing. But over all, a great little story. :) --wlt

humminbeanhumminbeanabout 15 years ago
Nice one!

Now you have me panting for the follow-through. Good luck on the contest!

OvercriticalOvercriticalalmost 8 years ago
A pleasant Story

No bells and whistles; just two people who aren't very special (except to each other) get together and find satisfaction (and maybe love) together. And in the Romance section, what more can you ask for. A gentle 5*

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I just enjoy writing erotica. It comes and goes in spurts. Hoping the cum spurting part comes back soon. :D