All Comments on 'Curiosity Sizzles in the Kitchen'

You wrote a nice story, but you seemed to be all over the place, at times. It's nice to write reflections and "live action", but it was hard to tell where one left off, and the other one began. Keep writing, but don't leave us hanging in the end.

100 stars

very hot story=love it my pusyy ache for such pleasures