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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/06/09

um

the ending does not fit this poem-- it is awful. Fucking bugs and little girls (or at least the illusion of it just turned my stomach) Maybe I am misreading the lines. The rest has promise, is quite good, which is why I wrote this at all

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by hmmnmm02/06/09

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between this afternoon and dawn I will certainly note this as among my favorite of today's poems. Oh, I just noticed what another seemed to infer. I didn't see that at all, or as what you meant. Funny isn't it, how we all bring our own issues to different works... thanks for the smile.

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by WickedEve02/09/09

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If I had not read the comment, I would have never thought about "fucking bugs and little girls." Anyway, I enjoyed the poem -- my interpretation of it.

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